Things to do:
1. Pick a picture and a topic.
2. Make sure your picture and topic match.
3. Make sure you brain storm before you write.
4.Don't get off topic.
5.Don't make a run on sentences.
6.Make sure you have caps and period.
7.Make sure your on topic.
8.Make sure you have made spell checks.
Tuesday, March 23, 2010
Monday, March 22, 2010
Should boys and girls be required to attend separate high schools?
Should boys and girls be required to attend separate high schools?
In my own opinion I don't think boys and girl should be separate in high school. My reason why is that there will be more fights, and drama.
In elementary boys and girls are together in school and if you separate them in high school it will be wired for them to be separate.
In a all girls school there will be more drama then a combine school, in an all boys school there will be more fights.
Those are my reasons why boys/girls should not be separated in high school.
In my own opinion I don't think boys and girl should be separate in high school. My reason why is that there will be more fights, and drama.
In elementary boys and girls are together in school and if you separate them in high school it will be wired for them to be separate.
In a all girls school there will be more drama then a combine school, in an all boys school there will be more fights.
Those are my reasons why boys/girls should not be separated in high school.
Monday, March 8, 2010
Makeing Full Sentences
1. April's movie Lord of the Flies.
April has a movie called Lord of the Flies.
2. A group of boys about 5 to 15 years old.
There is a group of boys in the age rang around 5 to 15 years of age.
3. The boys, very excited about not having adults to tell them what to do.
It's okay.
4. At first, trying to create their own civilisation.
At first, they are trying to create their own civilisation.
5. The conch, a large shell. Passed from boy to boy.
A conch is a large shell that can be passed to boy to boy.
6. allowed to speak when they have the conch.
You are allowed to speak only if you have the conch.
7. some boys are kind, some are greedy and selfish
Some boy can be kind, and some are just greedy and selfish.
8. bullies making fun of piggy even though he is the smartest of all the boys.
The bullies make fun of piggy even though he is the smartest boy of them all.
9. Some of the boys decide to follow Ralph, some follow Jack.
Some boys follow Ralph,why all the other follow Jack.
10. basically Ralph's gang and Jack's gang.
Basically both boys gang.
11. Obviously out of control when one boy dies.
It gets out of control when one boy dies.
12. At first, they boys are sure they will be rescued.
At first, the boys are sure that they will be rescued.
13. several weeks later without a rescue.
There was several week without an rescue.
14. an incredible amount of violence from a group of very ordinary boys.
There was an incredible amount of violence from a group of boys.
15. What might the writer, William Golding, be trying to say about human nature?
It's okay.
April has a movie called Lord of the Flies.
2. A group of boys about 5 to 15 years old.
There is a group of boys in the age rang around 5 to 15 years of age.
3. The boys, very excited about not having adults to tell them what to do.
It's okay.
4. At first, trying to create their own civilisation.
At first, they are trying to create their own civilisation.
5. The conch, a large shell. Passed from boy to boy.
A conch is a large shell that can be passed to boy to boy.
6. allowed to speak when they have the conch.
You are allowed to speak only if you have the conch.
7. some boys are kind, some are greedy and selfish
Some boy can be kind, and some are just greedy and selfish.
8. bullies making fun of piggy even though he is the smartest of all the boys.
The bullies make fun of piggy even though he is the smartest boy of them all.
9. Some of the boys decide to follow Ralph, some follow Jack.
Some boys follow Ralph,why all the other follow Jack.
10. basically Ralph's gang and Jack's gang.
Basically both boys gang.
11. Obviously out of control when one boy dies.
It gets out of control when one boy dies.
12. At first, they boys are sure they will be rescued.
At first, the boys are sure that they will be rescued.
13. several weeks later without a rescue.
There was several week without an rescue.
14. an incredible amount of violence from a group of very ordinary boys.
There was an incredible amount of violence from a group of boys.
15. What might the writer, William Golding, be trying to say about human nature?
It's okay.
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